I was being marched down the imposing halls of Alcatraz prison. My heart raced at a hundred miles an hour as I was dragged past cell doors, through the bars I saw various burly people with mean eyes and malicious grins. I was tossed forcefully into a cell at the very end of the long hallway. The guard glared at me and warned “Don’t even think of trying to escape!” then walked back along the hallway. I leaned against the back wall and suddenly one of the bricks moved back into the wall and a secret doorway was revealed.
Abbey
Abbey I love all the details you write in your story, using some really great adjectives and adverbs to make it really fun to read. And the ending is very exciting and a bit mysterious, and I wonder if an escape is in the works? Nice work writing about the picture in a very creative manner.
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